| [ EnglishOnly ] in KIDS 글 쓴 이(By): guest (발 바 리) 날 짜 (Date): 1996년10월10일(목) 23시23분57초 KDT 제 목(Title): Balbari's version of November's Essay Topic : What changes would you implement to Korea 1) Korea holds a great potential to become a powerful nation. However, before this goal can be realized, the country must find solutions to many of its existing problems that hinder its move towards such a nation. Korea is faced with problems related to traffic, environment, education politics population and more. 2) Many Koreans tend to move out of the country to live in foreign lands. This problem is in part attributed by the fact that most lands in Korea have reached a saturation point with relatively high population densities. It becomes a legitimate choice for people to migrate to other countries with better prospectives and opportunities. 3) Korea would have to unite in peace. As of now, Korea is divided between the communist north and the democratic south, but it is hoped that the two would eventually come together as one nation. PS: I might have changed some of your original ideas. Sorry. But I tried to preserve the main theme intact as much as my limitations due to my ignorance blocked the way!! :) I personally like antinuke's essay very much!!! I just tried out another version totally different. Why? because I was bored :) 발 바 리 = babo !!! 발 바 리 = babo!!! 발 바 리 = babo!!! |