| [ EnglishOnly ] in KIDS 글 쓴 이(By): november (無 名) 날 짜 (Date): 1996년10월10일(목) 15시29분21초 KDT 제 목(Title): Pleas revise it..... I have one essay but it need a lot of revisions. Please revise it... Topic is 'What would you change Korea' Let's start.. 1) Korea will be a powerful country. but in order to be a powerful country we must slove many problems ; traffic, environment, education politics, population etc. 2) A lot of Koreans will go to the abroad and they live there. : Korea hs small land but pupulation is very high therefore, a lot of people will go to the another country for their comportable life. 3) Korea will be a peaceful unification country. : Now, Korea is seperated north and south but in the future Korea will be bring a country under a single authority. That's it.... Thanks in advance... |