| [ EnglishOnly ] in KIDS 글 쓴 이(By): guest (Balbari) 날 짜 (Date): 1996년10월11일(금) 01시49분13초 KDT 제 목(Title): Another version of November's Essay Date: Thu, 10 Oct 1996 12:47:22 -0400 (EDT) MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=US-ASCII Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Status: O > I have one essay but it need a lot of revisions. > > Please revise it... Warning : This is not supposed to be any guideline for any serious person!!! I made a Jive version of the essay to give some of you a feel for African English. The kind of language spoken by Jamaicans and Africans. This version reveals only about 20% of the real Jive as 80% counts for the right accent and pronounciations. Anyway, enjoy!~ > > Topic is 'What would you change Korea' The Topic : Whi thing you de think you fit change am for Korean? > Let's start.. Make we start... > > 1) Korea will be a powerful country. but in order to be a powerful > country we must slove many problems ; traffic, environment, education > politics, population etc. > 1) Korea for sure go become a strong country. But before they go take the challenge, they should try hard to do something about their traffic, education, politics and things like that. > 2) A lot of Koreans will go to the abroad and they live there. > : Korea hs small land but pupulation is very high therefore, > a lot of people will go to the another country for their comportable > life. 2) You see, people go commot from their country for they no fit make progres for their home town. They get too much people for top but the land whi they get be too small. You see eh? So, they go seek better land for themselves. > 3) Korea will be a peaceful unification country. > : Now, Korea is seperated north and south but in the future > Korea will be bring a country under a single authority. 3) Korea go make peace with the north for unity. The way it is, for now they get two Koreas. But I talk say they should bring am under one rule so that it becomes one. > > That's it.... It be all I fit talk for now. > > Thanks in advance... > I thank you for top. * brought to you by courtesy of Balbari! |