| [ EnglishOnly ] in KIDS 글 쓴 이(By): guest (Balbari) 날 짜 (Date): 1997년09월16일(화) 05시20분51초 ROK 제 목(Title): Re: untitled Good essay. Well composed and very straight to the point. Couple of grammar mistakes here and there but readable and understandable. You could improve your composition skills by taking some basic writing courses though. |