| [ EnglishOnly ] in KIDS 글 쓴 이(By): raining (봄비) 날 짜 (Date): 1998년 6월 17일 수요일 오전 12시 37분 21초 제 목(Title): Re: need some help 그런데 왜 리플라이에 원문이 포함되지 않는 걸까요? 그런 기능이 있나요? 대강 생각나는 대로 써봤는데 참고하시고 제문장이 틀린 거에 대해선 책임 없습니다. :) First of all, I noticed that you didn't use articles in many places. Because I don't really know *inside view* of this waste water thing, I woulnd't know exactly which articles will be used, so I tried to leave that part if it is not obvious.. and all in all, your writing is good . ----------------------- Introduction For Wastewater Treatment -->Introduction to .. Recently South Korea is trying to use private business part to construct and operate various kinds of infrastructure : express way, railroad, airport and so on. Because of increasing needs for clean water, Government is planing to use private sector to construct and operate wastewater treatment facility. --> Recently, S. Korea government has made efforts to have private businesses to take part in constructing and operating various kinds of infrastructure such as .... which used to be government's role only. About wastewater treatment task(or peroject?), because of (i do have question here: did we have the facility previously or not? it is not clear to me. and in fact the first sentence and the second setence lack of connection somehow..) increasing needs of clean water, government plans to use private sector to ... Time Schedule '96. 12 Confirmation of operation privatization policy -----> privatized operation '97. 7 Facility needs inquiry for local gov. (15 projects selected as below) '98. 4 Cooperation agreement between central gov. and local gov. '98. 89 Project plan announcement 2) Merits of this projects * Central government will subsidize 70% of whole construction the cost during *the* construction period(Case I) of *post * construction And local government will subsidize rest of construction cost during *the * operation period. * It is easy to collect fee, because it is local government which pay fee. --> Collecting fee (what fee?) will be easy because it is local government which pay*s* fee. 3) Expectations in this projects * Prior occupation in B.O project market ---> is that occupation equivalent meaning to "experience"? 1) Introdution Hanwha is a broadly diversified business group with intersts from petrochemicals and energy to telecommunications and financial services. The Group is one of the top ten business conglomrates in South Korea and a world fortune 500 company. --> Hanwha group is a diversified business with broad range of interests from .... South Korea and ranked at the world fortune 500 company. *Also* Hanwha Construction has various... ) What Hanwha's want from the partner a(?) ---------------------------------------- now I think I shouldn't have tried to correct your writing. because I am not really qualified . (well. i am an engineer after all) |